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chapter 33

00:48, 9 August 2014

Tris' POV

I wake up in a hospital. I don't know how I got here. I can't be here, I start Divergent High tomorrow. Suddenly eight people I don't know burst through the door. An extremely handsome boy with gorgeous blue eyes is in tears. "Tris, thank god I thought I had lost you" he envelops me in a huge hug. He smells amazing. "Er, hi?" he pulls away. "Tris?" "yeah, erm I'm sorry, who are you?" "very funny Tris" "I'm sorry, I really don't know you" He starts to cry, gets up and leaves. "Tris, do you remember any of us?" asks a boy with a snake tattoo. He looks nearly as upset as blue eyes. I shake my head. "no, I don't know anyone here, I start Divergent high tomorrow" They all have tears in their eyes. "Tris, you started Divergent high two months ago, we are your best friends, yesterday you were kidnapped. When we came for you, you were hit on the head and have now lost your memory of the last couple of months." says a girl with mocha skin. "and who was that guy who just walked out?" "he was-is your boyfriend, Tris you love eachother." what?! I have a boyfriend. "why would he like me?" "Tris you are gorgeous, funny, brave, smart and selfless, you are perfect" says the guy with the tatoo. "and you are...?" "Oh, I'm Uriah, we dated for a while when you split up with Four out there." Four's a weird name. "oh, could you all introduce yourself with details that may help me remember?" They nod. There's Chris, Zeke, Uriah, Marlene, Lynn, Will and Shauna. Suddenly Neil Patrick Harris walks in. What the? "Tris, I heard what happened, are you okay?" "Neil Patrick Harris what are you-"

*flash back*

just as we are about to go off set, the director comes up to us. "Tris, I would like you to play a big role in the next season, Barney's niece, Ashleigh, Cat you can play a smaller role of Ashleigh's friend, Courtney. Uriah, I would like you to play Zeke, Courtney's boyfriend, we still need to cast a boyfriend for Ashleigh, he will have a similar sized role to her." "I know just the person, Four Eaton, I can give him a call if you want to talk to him. "

*present*

"HIMYM!, omg how could I forget, Uriah! I remember you!!" I am so happy, Uri my best friend, I remember everything about him. "the party.. the Pedrad pad, Zeke!! I remember you too!" they both hug me. "and... Chris!! you introduced me to everyone, and Will your boyfriend!" I remember them, they five me a hug aswell. "And I remember all the shopping that I had to put up with along with... Lynn! which helps me remember Shauna and Mar! I remember all of you, but I don't remember Four" They all hug me, and Zeke calls Four. I really want to remember him. "he's on his way." I nod.

Tobias' POV

We all burst into Tris' room. "Tris, thank god I thought I had lost you" I say, giving her a hug. "Er, hi?" I pull away. "Tris?" "yeah, erm I'm sorry, who are you?" "very funny Tris" "I'm sorry, I really don't know you" I can't believe it she doesn't remember me, I can't take it. I walk out of her room, out of the ward, and out of the hospital. I drive back to her house and sit on the doorstep. I don't know why I came here, I guess my heart just wants to be with her, but my brain wanted to leave so it compromised. Something catches my attention in the corner of my eye. Her promise ring, it must have come off in the struggle. I get a phone call. Zeke. She remembers all of them, but not me. I have to make her remember. "I'm on my way" I hang up and drive back to the hospital. I walk back into her room. "Four, could you please tell me about you, things that will make you remember?" I nod. "I have two things, my real name is Tobias, and last night. gave you this promise ring, please Tris you have to remember me. I love you, forever and always."

Tris' POV

*flashback*

"My name is Tobias Eaton" I gasp. "the mayor's son?!" he nods. "why don't you tell anyone" he turns away from me, takes off his blazer and pulls ap his shirt. He has scars covering his back, some old, some new. My poor Tobias. I carefully run my fingers over them, then I kiss a fairly new one on his neck, he winces slightly. "sorry, but did marcus do this to you?" he nods. "He says its for my own good" he replies. "Oh my god Tobias, what else has he done?" please tell me he doesn't hurt him more that this. "Sometimes if he gets drunk he throws empty bottles at me and sometimes he just punches me, but the worst is, he ,he killed my mother a-and I saw it"

he lets go of my hand and pulls a small velvet box out of his pocket. "don't worry, I'm not proposing, we are way too young, but Tris I love you so much and never want to lose you, it has happened before and it felt like half of my heart was ripped out of my chest, and when you came back, you brought it back with you, we complete eachother. This is a promise ring, Beatrice Prior, when we are older do you promise to stay with me and I promise that we will get married some day, so what do you say?"

"I love you" "I love you more" "impossible" "forever" "and always"

*present*

"Tobias" I whisper. "oh my god Tobias" I lean in and kiss him. I can't believe I forgot him. Marcus is going to pay. He pulls away. "you remember" I nod and he cups my face in his hand and kisses me again, a kiss filled with passion. "no PDA!" shouts... Neil? We all look at him. "what? there are people who want to see you, Cobie, Alyson, Josh and Jason are all waiting and we are finding it hard to keep them away from the public, I barely got through, but the doctor says no more than ten visitors at a time so, would you guys mind leaving and waiting outside for a bit? Four, you can stay" They all nod and leave. A few second later Cobie, Alyson, Josh and Jason cone in. "Tris! how are you?" asks Alyson and Josh. It's funny how similar they all are to their characters apart from Neil. "I've been better but I think I should be good for filming tomorrow" I say and they laugh. Cobie and Alyson hug me and Tobias, Josh and Jason hug me and bro-hug Tobias and Neil being as camp as he is hugs both of us. They leave and then my family comes in, I had forgotten about them in all the madness. Caleb rushes up to me and hugs me and cries. "Hey little sis, you had me scared there, please don't leave me" he sobs. I laugh. "I didn't mean to" he laughs too and looks at Tobias. "Four, thanks for saving her" he says, which is a lot coming from him because he is actually being kind to him. Tobias says he will wait outside, I don't think he likes family situations. I sit with my family for a few minutes before the doctor says I can leave. My mum has a black tank top for me and a black hoodie that says dauntless in white. She also has brought me my favourite black skinny jeans and my beloved black combat boots. I get dressed and walk outside.

When we get home, my parents say Tobias can stay with us permanently because it is dangerous with Marcus. He was kind of staying but after the break up he left. I get up to my room and fall asleep as my head is on its way to the pillow.

That was long!!!!

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-Cat

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