Harry Potter and the ravenclaw mystery

TITLE:               Harry Potter and the ravenclaw mystery

AUTHOR:        rose Potter - @slytherinqueen4life

SOURCE:         Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/209839555-harry-potter-and-the-ravenclaw-mystery

STATUS:           Completed

TAGS:                #harrypotter #wrongboywholived

ADDIONATAL TAGS:          #AlternateUniverse #DumbledoreBashing #HarryxOC #HeterosexualPairing #OutsideCharacters

SUMMARY:

When Johnathan Evan Potter gets names the boy who lived Harry Potter decides to show his parents how wrong they are for neglecting him. Watch out world here comes Harry Potter!

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RATING:          7/10

REVIEW:

The idea for the story was really great as it was your usual Harry got a twin and being declared the wrong boy who lived. The writing of the story was good with a few mistakes in grammar, and typos/spellings. However, this was dragged down by the lack in the plot execution.

There are quite a handful of plot holes. They can be ignored if you just want to read fanfictions and are ok with these minor mistakes. But if you are sensitive to these then skip this story. I say that it is minor because the plot holes don't really have a big impact on the outcome of the story. But they are those that are a bit questionable or can be used to bring more spice to the story. Some are even mismatched information like the ages.

I also disagree with the summary of this. Upon reading the story, Harry wasn't really neglected he was just sometimes forgotten as mentioned in the story. So I think that the summary was exaggerated.

That is all, if you are ok with the issues mentioned, please do proceed and read the story.

Date of Review: 09/11/2021