The Elite

TITLE:               The Elite

AUTHOR:         Aleczander Wright - @PixieDixie745

SOURCE:         Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/174990369-the-elite

STATUS:           Completed

TAGS:                #abuse #boyxboy # boyxboyxboy # boyxboyxboyxboy #dracomalfoy #drarry #dumbledorebashing #harrypotter #harryxfred #harryxfredxgeorge #harryxfredxgeorgexdraco #harryxgeorge #hermionexginny #hogwarts #magic #mates #mpreg #nodursleys #potterbashing #triplets #vampireharry #velaadraco #weasley #weasleybashing #wrongboywholived #Mature

ADDIONATAL TAGS:          #MPreg

SUMMARY:

WARNING CONTAINS SEXUAL SCENES, boyxboy, boyxboyxboy and boyxboyxboyxboy

8 Children all left home and became the most powerful witches and wizards the world has seen

Harry and Rose Potter left home as their parents only cared about Charles. Hermione couldn't be a witch when her parents hate her. Draco and Blaise were abused so they left. Ginny was ignored when her little sister was born. Luna lost her father and Neville couldn't live with his grandmother.

Together they form The Elite.

I do not own any of the characters they are owned by jk Rowling. I own the plot, Rose Potter and Charles Potter.

All Rights Reserved

RATING:          4/10

REVIEW:

Let me start with the Authors writing skills. It was actually good. He has a talent at writing and it shows in how he elaborates on the story. However, it was dragged down by the lack of planning and plot.

He actually admitted to this story being all around the place. And I find it that it was like each chapter came from different books with the same concept. It seems to me that for every chapter there are different outcomes from what the previous should have. The plot holes were compounding from start to end.

I believe that this was caused because of lack of structure for the story. The author admitted that the only solid idea for the story was that there would be this powerful group which is the Elite and how they overcome trials. After that, I think it was all impromptu.

There was a rewrite of the story but it was last updated on February 22, 2019. So it was either abandoned or on hiatus.

Concluding this review, you should read it at your own risk. The concept behind the story was great but the execution was poor. And please, if you decide to read the story, do not bash or shame the Author. It was still their hard work no matter what.

Date of Review:     09/12/2021