Inheritance

TITLE:               Inheritance

AUTHOR:        Styx - @StyxHuntress & star242759 -@star242759

SOURCE:         Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/104540410-inheritance

                                               - https://www.wattpad.com/story/231829122-inheritance

STATUS:           Completed

TAGS:                #bellatrixlestrange #creature #dom #draco #dragon #drarry #harry #inheritance #lightbashing #malfoy #mentionsofrape #mentionsofviolence #needing #potter #sub #thomasriddle #voldemort #wolf

ADDIONATAL TAGS:           #Adopted #AlternateUniverse #MPreg

SUMMARY:

Harry Potter Thought his life was over. Having been beaten to almost an inch of his life many times, he receives and early inheritance, and discovers he's not who he's supposed to be. Everything he knows is a lie. Will he get through it, or will he fall?

And who is Ciaran Salazar Riddle?

Takes place during sixth year.

Drarry

Light bashing

Weasley bashing (though not Fred and George, they are still cool.)

Hermione is bad at first but is redeemed later.

I do not own Harry Potter J.K. Rowling does. I don't even own the plot StyxHuntress does. Styx Huntress gave me permission to try to finish this story. Usually I am only an editor, but I am going to take a hand at writing and see what happens. The Prologue and first 19 chapters are StyxHuntress Chapters after that it is all mine. I hope you enjoy.

All Rights Reserved

RATING:           7/10

REVIEW:

As you've noticed, there are two authors and two links. The reason for this is that the first one is the original author and link of the story, and the second was the one who adopted the story to finish it. I think that I've read the original story way back when the adopted one was still ongoing but I will be rating the adopted one as it was what I recently finished reading.

This is actually the first time that the adoptive author has written a story as mentioned by him/her. He used to edit stories for other writers and that was also the reason that I don't know if the original chapters (which is mentioned what they are,) are edited or not so I cannot really rate the original author. And I don't like re-reading the same story in a short span of time. So, on to reviewing the adoptive author's work, he/she did a great job, I haven't really encountered grammatical or typographical errors and if ever there are, I haven't noticed them. The flow of the story was actually nice not too slow but not fast and it seems natural. I actually didn't notice (or I just don't pay much attention,) to the changed in the writing style of the story. And it was good on that part.

For the original author, I applaud you for the great idea behind the story. She made it so the story was an alternate universe from the original. There are parts that are retained from the cannon but the parts that are not were explained throughout the story and it fits well for his/her idea.

The rating of this story was more of a personal reason. The story did not appeal much to me but it definitely was well-written. If you are interested, do read it!

Date of Review:           09/05/2021