What A Wolf Wants[√]

TITLE:               What A Wolf Wants[√]

AUTHOR:        koda Kelly - @KodaLokison

SOURCE:         Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/260109467-what-a-wolf-wants-%E2%88%9A

STATUS:          Completed

TAGS:               #fanfiction #gaypride #greyback #harrypotter #harryxfenrir #lgbtgiction #lgbtrights #love #mates #potter #runaway #werewolf

ADDIONATAL TAGS:      #SlightCharacterBashing #Fluff #Non-Canon

SUMMARY:

A GreybackXPotter story... Wolves are apex predators, they are at the top of the food chain. Wolves will chase and test their prey looking for weakness...What weakness could a werewolf found in a human maybe the Human is his weakness?

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RATING:          7/10

REVIEW:

I would like to applaud the Author as he/she has improved based on her previous stories. I have read some of the Author's stories way beyond I started to review stories. It still has many grammatical errors, misused words, and typos, but I really like the Author's ideas for the stories. And I kind of also admire the Author's gut to tell off rude readers. So thumbs up to this author.

On to the story, the story stills has errors as I said earlier. There is also a huge gap between the cannon versus the Author's version which you will find out if you read it as the Author explained it at the beginning. I'm not really sure about this as I've read the Author's stories a long time ago, but I think most of the Author's work are somewhat alternate universe from the canon. The Author does this so that it can cater to his/her idea and execute the desired story ending.

I just found this story a bit lacking in the ending since the outcome of the war between the so-called "Light" and "Dark" Wizards and Witches. But I don't condone the decision of the Author as it is still his/her choice how the story will flow. This is just my personal opinion. Also, I do get that the focus of this story is more on about Fenrir, Harry, Fenrir's pack. The others are just sideline or deemed insignificant.

So there, the rating of this story was a mixture of technical issues and personal preference. If you think you will like the story, please read.

Date of Review:      09/02/2021