Yellow-chan Reads Comments!
12:57, 27 May 2017Yellow-chan: Hello dear readers!! Today, I will be reading some of your comments in some chapters!
AND! We have special guests! Please welcome the Naruto Characters plus Ayumi, Yuusuke, Riku, Ryota and the three idiots!
Ayumi: HELLO READER-CHANS!!
Naruto: Hello!!
Riku: Why the f*ck am I here?
Shinjiru: Hello *smexy smile and winks*
Yellow-chan: It's nice to meet you guys!
Ayumi: Heck yea! I miss you so much Yellow-sh*t!
Naruto: Thank you so much for bringing Ayumi in our world!!
Sasuke: Hn.
Yellow-chan: No problem, Naruto! And hello to you Sasuke *smiles*
Sasuke: ...
Yellow-chan: I wonder how those girls are coming after your duck butt hair.
Ino: Hey! Don't insult Sasuke-kun!!
Sakura: Yeah!!
Yellow-chan: Let's move on with the comments!!
Chapter: Hello I'm Ayumi :)
Riku: How I wish Ayumi has 12 children... I can't wait to see my grandchildren!!
Ayumi: Uhm.. 12? *sweat drops*
Ryota: OF COURSE! Or you could have 24 children if you wanted *snickers*
Ayumi: 24!? *anime fell*
Yellow-chan: You gave me an idea! Thank you Riku-san, Ryota-san.
Riku: No problem!!
Ayumi: NO. PLEASE. NO BABIES.
Chapter: Graduation Day!! Hoorayy!!
Yellow-chan: DAMN!
Ayumi: HE LOVES SAKURA SECRETLY!
Sasuke: Tch.
Sakura: *blushes*
Ino: NO! I DON'T ACCEPT!
Fan girls of Sasuke: YEAH!!
Yellow-chan: Come on Sasuke, don't be shy~! *pushes him towards Sakura*
Sasuke: I don't like her.
Ayumi: Oh but you'll be mar-
Yellow-chan: SPOILERS! *puts crumpled paper on Ayumi's mouth*
Naruto: Spoilers?
Yellow-chan: *whispers to Ayumi* They don't know.
Ayumi: That sucks. I'm excited to see Sarada.
Sakura: Who's Sarada?
Ayumi: Your daug-
Yellow-chan: NEXT!!
Chapter: Graduation Day!! Hoorayy!!
Yellow-chan: Say, Hidan, is this what you really feel towards Kakuzu?
Hidan: F*ck no! He only cares about his money and sh*t! I don't give a single f*ck about it!
Kakuzu: The feeling is mutual.
Yellow-chan: Really? *throws pics of Hidan x Kakuzu everywhere*
Hidan: WHAT THE F*CK ARE THOSE!?
Yellow-chan: Pictures duuuh...
Hidan: WHERE DID YOU GET THAT!?
Yellow-chan: Have you heard the power of google? If you didn't, then you know it. *smiles mischievously*
Yato: I SEE YAOI EVERYWHERE!
Laito: Yaoi at its finest.
Yellow-chan: Reader-sans! Please draw Laito and Yato together. Thank you :D
Yato and Laito: STOP!!
Chapter: Graduation Day!! Hoorayy!!
Yellow-chan: *throws a box of milk to Neji* Now your destiny is milk *snickers*
Neji: Tch.
Yellow-chan: Aww! Don't be like Sasuke!
Ayumi: I wonder if there are SasuNeji pictures...
Shinjiru: That would be awesome!!
Neji: Idiots *sighs*
Ayumi: If Neji is on a commercial, he could advertise a milk.
Yellow-chan: I agree..
Shinjiru: Or maybe, there's a girl name Destiny. We could push them together.
Ayumi: I'll be the cupid!!
Yellow-chan: QUICK! FIND DESTINY THE GIRL AND THE MILK!!
Shinjiru and Ayumi: HAI!! *salutes*
Neji: Idiots..
Tenten: You said that the second time around Neji-kun. *sweat drops*
Chapter: Memories Fear Happiness
Ayumi: Yellow-sh*t, I should've done that!!
Yellow-chan: It's too late, my child.
Ayumi: AM NOT YOUR CHILD!
Yellow-chan: But I created you~
Ayumi: Sasuke! Say something!! *nudges Sasuke*
Sasuke: Hn.
Ayumi: Wait, if I push Sasuke in the river, he'll not be a fish...
Yellow-chan: Eh? What would he be?
Ayumi: A DUCK!! *laughs*
Sasuke: *glares at her*
Chapter: Zabuza Momochi
Yellow-chan: Sasuke, are you planning on changing your hairstyle? Your hair is a butt since you were born.
Sasuke: My hair is not a problem. The problem is your mind.
Laito: BUUUUUUURRNN!!
Shinjiru: DAMN SASUKE!
Yato: WAY TO GO!!
Yuusuke: The best come back ever!!
Yellow-chan: How about I burn you to death? That would be great! *giggles evilly*
Yuusuke: Oh sh*t. Run.
Chapter: Tree Climbing?? Whut??
Ayumi: Kakashi-sensei, how did those soaps fit in your a*s?
Kakashi-sensei: I am not putting it 'there'
Yellow-chan: Maybe Kakashi-sensei sh*ts soaps.
Kakashi-sensei: That would be great.
Ayumi: That's gross...
Yellow-chan: Well, there are no used soaps that are not gross..
Ayumi: DON'T TELL ME KAKASHI-SENSEI STEALS SOAPS JUST FOR ME!?
Yellow-chan: *shrugs* Who knows? ;)
Ayumi: SENSEI!? ARE YOU DOING THAT!?
Kakashi-sensei: Maybe.. *chuckles*
Ayumi: Oh Kami.. I've been tasting soaps from different bodies..
Yellow-chan: Your sentence is weird..
Chapter: Perfection
Ayumi: The fourth wall is always broken anyways. Why bother fix it?
Yellow-chan: I agree. The fourth wall can't be fix anymore. Poor fourth wall-chan...
Yuusuke: Probably this fourth wall is only a meter. So short lol.
Ayumi: But you're d*ck is still shorter than the wall...
Yuusuke: You b*tch.
Ayumi: Shut up whose d*ck is the same size of a rice.
Yuusuke: Wow.. I'll let you look at it. Let's see if my d*ck is the same size.
Ayumi: Ew!! Are you even my brother!?
Yuusuke and Ayumi: *constant bickering*
Yato: *whispers to Shinjiru and Laito* I smell incest...
Yuusuke and Ayumi: I HEARD THAT!!
Chapter: The Prophecy (Author's Note)
Yellow-chan: I felt stupid not knowing who's Masashi back then.
Ayumi: You are really stupid.
Yuusuke: Maybe our family is related to Masashi-san?
Riku: Or Masashi-san is our long lost brother!!
Yellow-chan: Who knows?
Ayumi: You made us so you know!
Yellow-chan: I don't know *smiles sheepishly*
Chapter: Meeting Itachi... Zabuza Returns... Ayumi kills... Ayumi Saves
Yellow-chan: SASUKE JUST GOT BURNED!!
Sasuke: Hn..
Yellow-chan: Hey Sasuke! What can you say with reader-chans?
Sasuke: I don't care.
Ayumi: Daaang... Rude Sasuke. Rude.
Yellow-chan: *whispers to Itachi* Is he on period?
Itachi: *walks away*
Yellow-chan: *anime cries* ITACHI-SENPAI DIDN'T NOTICE ME!!
Chapter: What The Scroll!!
Ayumi: What the f*ck is f*cking bethrothed?
Yuusuke: ...
Three idiots: ...
Itachi and Sasuke: ...
Ayumi: What!? No one will answer my f*cking question!?
Sakura and Ino: ...
Neji: ...
Gaara, Temari, Kankuro: ...
Ayumi: Yellow-sh*t! Why this b*tches won't answer me!?
Yellow-chan: She's really hopeless...
Mei: I don't think Ayumi would be a great Mizukage *sighs*
Ayumi: Just because of a f*cking word!?
Chapter: What The Scroll!!
Ayumi: How am I suppose to shove the soap in Kakashi-sensei's mouth if he has a mask on?
Yellow-chan: You're like killing two birds in one stone.
Ayumi: Killing Kakashi-sensei in one soap *snickers*
Ayumi and Yellow-chan: *stares at each other then looks at Kakashi-sensei whose reading Icha Icha Paradise*
Kakashi-sensei: What?
Ayumi and Yellow-chan: ATTACK!!!
Everyone: *sweat drops*
Chapter: What The Scroll!!
Riku: *flips hair*
Ayumi: She's the worst mom you could ever imagine.
Riku: F*ck you.
Ayumi: Have you ever seen a mom beat you a child with a frying pan? Me and Yuusuke experience that.
Yuusuke: I agree.
Ayumi: Have you seen a mom shoves food in a child's mouth? We experience that.
Yuusuke: I agree.
Ayumi: Have you seen a mom throws plate towards a child? We also experience that.
Yuusuke: I agree.
Riku: Why you b*tches!! Be lucky to have a sexy, gorgeous, and beautiful mother like me!!
Ryota: My wife sucks at cooking too!!
Riku: RYOTA, AYUMI, YUUSUKE! IF I CAUGHT UP TO YOU I'LL BEAT YOUR A*SES UP!!
Ayumi, Ryota, Yuusuke: RUN!
Chapter: 3rd Part of Chuunin Exams!!
Yellow-chan: The reader says it all!
Shino: ...
Ayumi: I didn't mean to tell that Shino! I swear! Your voice is indeed sexy!!
Shinjiru: My voice is smexier than Gaara's *chuckles*
Yellow-chan: Dream on, Shinji.
Shinjiru: I got more fan girls than Gaara! Right girls? *winks*
Ayumi: To be honest, I'd rather go with Gaara than you.
Shinjiru: Nooooo!! *anime cries*
Yellow-chan: GAAYUMI IS SAILING~!!
Riku: NO MY SHIP! SAIL B*TCH SAIL!! SHINJIYUMI KEEP SAILING B*TCH!!
Chapter: The Prodigy Book
Yuusuke: What's inside aside from the prodigy book, Ayumi?
Ayumi: There is porn *wiggles eyebrows*
Yellow-chan: Oh my.. Sasuke likes porn!?
Ayumi: I stole it that's why the box is empty.
Jiraiya: Give me the porn!!
Ayumi: HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA NO.
Jiraiya: *cries*
Yellow-chan: Who would've thought Sasuke likes porn.
Sasuke: I don't like it. And I don't have it.
Yuusuke: He doesn't like it...Because he loves it.
Chapter: The Hokage's Funeral :(
Hidan: Jashin is not please with this lil' sh*t.
Ayumi: And I don't want to be his long lost sister. He's a f*cking retarded girl.
Hidan: I'm not a girl you b*tch!!
Ayumi: You're f*cking way girlier than me!
Hidan: You sh*t should be happy that I'm not sacrificing you to Jashin!
Ayumi: Use your d*ck as a sacrifice b*tch. Oh wait. You can't sacrifice it. Too small for Jashin-sama's liking *laughs*
Hidan: Shut the f*ck up!!
Ayumi: ITA-KUN!! THIS A*SHOLE IS BULLYING ME *cries*
Hidan: Oi! I'm not bullying that sh*t! She started it!
Ayumi: *sniffs* He wants me to f*cking sacrifice to Jashin!
Itachi: *walks out*
Ayumi: He likes walking out does he?
Hidan: I f*cking agree.
Ayumi: Does Uchihas always have periods?
Hidan: Ask yourself b*tch.
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Yellow-chan: And there you have it!
Ayumi: Thank you for having us, Yellow-sh*t!
Yuusuke: I really enjoy this!!
Yellow-chan: If you want to have more time with them, comment down below!!
Ayumi: Give us questions, dares, or challenges that you like us to try!
Yuusuke: Thank you for the support! Hope to see you in the sequel ;)
Yellow-chan: Do you want Ayumi to meet Kimiko? Comment down below!
Ayumi: Who the f*ck is she?
Yellow-chan: Kimiko Kamegami is my other OC on my other book.
Ayumi: Her surname is f*cking cool.
Kimiko: Please check out A Goddess Their Guardian by Yellow-chan as well! :D
Yellow-chan: YOU'RE IN THE WRONG BOOK! *shoves Kimiko*
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