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Yellow-chan Reads Comments!

12:57, 27 May 2017

Yellow-chan: Hello dear readers!! Today, I will be reading some of your comments in some chapters!

AND! We have special guests! Please welcome the Naruto Characters plus Ayumi, Yuusuke, Riku, Ryota and the three idiots!

Ayumi: HELLO READER-CHANS!!

Naruto: Hello!!

Riku: Why the f*ck am I here?

Shinjiru: Hello *smexy smile and winks*

Yellow-chan: It's nice to meet you guys!

Ayumi: Heck yea! I miss you so much Yellow-sh*t!

Naruto: Thank you so much for bringing Ayumi in our world!!

Sasuke: Hn.

Yellow-chan: No problem, Naruto! And hello to you Sasuke *smiles*

Sasuke: ...

Yellow-chan: I wonder how those girls are coming after your duck butt hair.

Ino: Hey! Don't insult Sasuke-kun!!

Sakura: Yeah!!

Yellow-chan: Let's move on with the comments!!

Chapter: Hello I'm Ayumi :)

Riku: How I wish Ayumi has 12 children... I can't wait to see my grandchildren!!

Ayumi: Uhm.. 12? *sweat drops*

Ryota: OF COURSE! Or you could have 24 children if you wanted *snickers*

Ayumi: 24!? *anime fell*

Yellow-chan: You gave me an idea! Thank you Riku-san, Ryota-san.

Riku: No problem!!

Ayumi: NO. PLEASE. NO BABIES.

Chapter: Graduation Day!! Hoorayy!!

Yellow-chan: DAMN!

Ayumi: HE LOVES SAKURA SECRETLY!

Sasuke: Tch.

Sakura: *blushes*

Ino: NO! I DON'T ACCEPT!

Fan girls of Sasuke: YEAH!!

Yellow-chan: Come on Sasuke, don't be shy~! *pushes him towards Sakura*

Sasuke: I don't like her.

Ayumi: Oh but you'll be mar-

Yellow-chan: SPOILERS! *puts crumpled paper on Ayumi's mouth*

Naruto: Spoilers?

Yellow-chan: *whispers to Ayumi* They don't know.

Ayumi: That sucks. I'm excited to see Sarada.

Sakura: Who's Sarada?

Ayumi: Your daug-

Yellow-chan: NEXT!!

Chapter: Graduation Day!! Hoorayy!!

Yellow-chan: Say, Hidan, is this what you really feel towards Kakuzu?

Hidan: F*ck no! He only cares about his money and sh*t! I don't give a single f*ck about it!

Kakuzu: The feeling is mutual.

Yellow-chan: Really? *throws pics of Hidan x Kakuzu everywhere*

Hidan: WHAT THE F*CK ARE THOSE!?

Yellow-chan: Pictures duuuh...

Hidan: WHERE DID YOU GET THAT!?

Yellow-chan: Have you heard the power of google? If you didn't, then you know it. *smiles mischievously*

Yato: I SEE YAOI EVERYWHERE!

Laito: Yaoi at its finest.

Yellow-chan: Reader-sans! Please draw Laito and Yato together. Thank you :D

Yato and Laito: STOP!!

Chapter: Graduation Day!! Hoorayy!!

Yellow-chan: *throws a box of milk to Neji* Now your destiny is milk *snickers*

Neji: Tch.

Yellow-chan: Aww! Don't be like Sasuke!

Ayumi: I wonder if there are SasuNeji pictures...

Shinjiru: That would be awesome!!

Neji: Idiots *sighs*

Ayumi: If Neji is on a commercial, he could advertise a milk.

Yellow-chan: I agree..

Shinjiru: Or maybe, there's a girl name Destiny. We could push them together.

Ayumi: I'll be the cupid!!

Yellow-chan: QUICK! FIND DESTINY THE GIRL AND THE MILK!!

Shinjiru and Ayumi: HAI!! *salutes*

Neji: Idiots..

Tenten: You said that the second time around Neji-kun. *sweat drops*

Chapter: Memories Fear Happiness

Ayumi: Yellow-sh*t, I should've done that!!

Yellow-chan: It's too late, my child.

Ayumi: AM NOT YOUR CHILD!

Yellow-chan: But I created you~

Ayumi: Sasuke! Say something!! *nudges Sasuke*

Sasuke: Hn.

Ayumi: Wait, if I push Sasuke in the river, he'll not be a fish...

Yellow-chan: Eh? What would he be?

Ayumi: A DUCK!! *laughs*

Sasuke: *glares at her*

Chapter: Zabuza Momochi

Yellow-chan: Sasuke, are you planning on changing your hairstyle? Your hair is a butt since you were born.

Sasuke: My hair is not a problem. The problem is your mind.

Laito: BUUUUUUURRNN!!

Shinjiru: DAMN SASUKE!

Yato: WAY TO GO!!

Yuusuke: The best come back ever!!

Yellow-chan: How about I burn you to death? That would be great! *giggles evilly*

Yuusuke: Oh sh*t. Run.

Chapter: Tree Climbing?? Whut??

Ayumi: Kakashi-sensei, how did those soaps fit in your a*s?

Kakashi-sensei: I am not putting it 'there'

Yellow-chan: Maybe Kakashi-sensei sh*ts soaps.

Kakashi-sensei: That would be great.

Ayumi: That's gross...

Yellow-chan: Well, there are no used soaps that are not gross..

Ayumi: DON'T TELL ME KAKASHI-SENSEI STEALS SOAPS JUST FOR ME!?

Yellow-chan: *shrugs* Who knows? ;)

Ayumi: SENSEI!? ARE YOU DOING THAT!?

Kakashi-sensei: Maybe.. *chuckles*

Ayumi: Oh Kami.. I've been tasting soaps from different bodies..

Yellow-chan: Your sentence is weird..

Chapter: Perfection

Ayumi: The fourth wall is always broken anyways. Why bother fix it?

Yellow-chan: I agree. The fourth wall can't be fix anymore. Poor fourth wall-chan...

Yuusuke: Probably this fourth wall is only a meter. So short lol.

Ayumi: But you're d*ck is still shorter than the wall...

Yuusuke: You b*tch.

Ayumi: Shut up whose d*ck is the same size of a rice.

Yuusuke: Wow.. I'll let you look at it. Let's see if my d*ck is the same size.

Ayumi: Ew!! Are you even my brother!?

Yuusuke and Ayumi: *constant bickering*

Yato: *whispers to Shinjiru and Laito* I smell incest...

Yuusuke and Ayumi: I HEARD THAT!!

Chapter: The Prophecy (Author's Note)

Yellow-chan: I felt stupid not knowing who's Masashi back then.

Ayumi: You are really stupid.

Yuusuke: Maybe our family is related to Masashi-san?

Riku: Or Masashi-san is our long lost brother!!

Yellow-chan: Who knows?

Ayumi: You made us so you know!

Yellow-chan: I don't know *smiles sheepishly*

Chapter: Meeting Itachi... Zabuza Returns... Ayumi kills... Ayumi Saves

Yellow-chan: SASUKE JUST GOT BURNED!!

Sasuke: Hn..

Yellow-chan: Hey Sasuke! What can you say with reader-chans?

Sasuke: I don't care.

Ayumi: Daaang... Rude Sasuke. Rude.

Yellow-chan: *whispers to Itachi* Is he on period?

Itachi: *walks away*

Yellow-chan: *anime cries* ITACHI-SENPAI DIDN'T NOTICE ME!!

Chapter: What The Scroll!!

Ayumi: What the f*ck is f*cking bethrothed?

Yuusuke: ...

Three idiots: ...

Itachi and Sasuke: ...

Ayumi: What!? No one will answer my f*cking question!?

Sakura and Ino: ...

Neji: ...

Gaara, Temari, Kankuro: ...

Ayumi: Yellow-sh*t! Why this b*tches won't answer me!?

Yellow-chan: She's really hopeless...

Mei: I don't think Ayumi would be a great Mizukage *sighs*

Ayumi: Just because of a f*cking word!?

Chapter: What The Scroll!!

Ayumi: How am I suppose to shove the soap in Kakashi-sensei's mouth if he has a mask on?

Yellow-chan: You're like killing two birds in one stone.

Ayumi: Killing Kakashi-sensei in one soap *snickers*

Ayumi and Yellow-chan: *stares at each other then looks at Kakashi-sensei whose reading Icha Icha Paradise*

Kakashi-sensei: What?

Ayumi and Yellow-chan: ATTACK!!!

Everyone: *sweat drops*

Chapter: What The Scroll!!

Riku: *flips hair*

Ayumi: She's the worst mom you could ever imagine.

Riku: F*ck you.

Ayumi: Have you ever seen a mom beat you a child with a frying pan? Me and Yuusuke experience that.

Yuusuke: I agree.

Ayumi: Have you seen a mom shoves food in a child's mouth? We experience that.

Yuusuke: I agree.

Ayumi: Have you seen a mom throws plate towards a child? We also experience that.

Yuusuke: I agree.

Riku: Why you b*tches!! Be lucky to have a sexy, gorgeous, and beautiful mother like me!!

Ryota: My wife sucks at cooking too!!

Riku: RYOTA, AYUMI, YUUSUKE! IF I CAUGHT UP TO YOU I'LL BEAT YOUR A*SES UP!!

Ayumi, Ryota, Yuusuke: RUN!

Chapter: 3rd Part of Chuunin Exams!!

Yellow-chan: The reader says it all!

Shino: ...

Ayumi: I didn't mean to tell that Shino! I swear! Your voice is indeed sexy!!

Shinjiru: My voice is smexier than Gaara's *chuckles*

Yellow-chan: Dream on, Shinji.

Shinjiru: I got more fan girls than Gaara! Right girls? *winks*

Ayumi: To be honest, I'd rather go with Gaara than you.

Shinjiru: Nooooo!! *anime cries*

Yellow-chan: GAAYUMI IS SAILING~!!

Riku: NO MY SHIP! SAIL B*TCH SAIL!! SHINJIYUMI KEEP SAILING B*TCH!!

Chapter: The Prodigy Book

Yuusuke: What's inside aside from the prodigy book, Ayumi?

Ayumi: There is porn *wiggles eyebrows*

Yellow-chan: Oh my.. Sasuke likes porn!?

Ayumi: I stole it that's why the box is empty.

Jiraiya: Give me the porn!!

Ayumi: HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA NO.

Jiraiya: *cries*

Yellow-chan: Who would've thought Sasuke likes porn.

Sasuke: I don't like it. And I don't have it.

Yuusuke: He doesn't like it...Because he loves it.

Chapter: The Hokage's Funeral :(

Hidan: Jashin is not please with this lil' sh*t.

Ayumi: And I don't want to be his long lost sister. He's a f*cking retarded girl.

Hidan: I'm not a girl you b*tch!!

Ayumi: You're f*cking way girlier than me!

Hidan: You sh*t should be happy that I'm not sacrificing you to Jashin!

Ayumi: Use your d*ck as a sacrifice b*tch. Oh wait. You can't sacrifice it. Too small for Jashin-sama's liking *laughs*

Hidan: Shut the f*ck up!!

Ayumi: ITA-KUN!! THIS A*SHOLE IS BULLYING ME *cries*

Hidan: Oi! I'm not bullying that sh*t! She started it!

Ayumi: *sniffs* He wants me to f*cking sacrifice to Jashin!

Itachi: *walks out*

Ayumi: He likes walking out does he?

Hidan: I f*cking agree.

Ayumi: Does Uchihas always have periods?

Hidan: Ask yourself b*tch.

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Yellow-chan: And there you have it!

Ayumi: Thank you for having us, Yellow-sh*t!

Yuusuke: I really enjoy this!!

Yellow-chan: If you want to have more time with them, comment down below!!

Ayumi: Give us questions, dares, or challenges that you like us to try!

Yuusuke: Thank you for the support! Hope to see you in the sequel ;)

Yellow-chan: Do you want Ayumi to meet Kimiko? Comment down below!

Ayumi: Who the f*ck is she?

Yellow-chan: Kimiko Kamegami is my other OC on my other book.

Ayumi: Her surname is f*cking cool.

Kimiko: Please check out A Goddess Their Guardian by Yellow-chan as well! :D

Yellow-chan: YOU'RE IN THE WRONG BOOK! *shoves Kimiko*

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