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Part 10

18:26, 29 January 2025

Dil Ka Rishta......

Part 10

Naina in her heart:- kyun.... maine sab kyun bata diya unhe..... usually main apne dil ki baat aalekh aur apne freinds ke siwa kisi se nahi karti par... kyun sujal hi kyun... ek minute... sujal... how come i call him sujal... kal tak to main unhe mr garewal keh rahi thi ab sujal.... but why.....?

sujal in his heart:- kitni azeeb baat hai na... humesha sochta tha ki,.. main hi kyun... mujhe hi itani takleef kyun... par naina ne bhi bahut saha hai... aur sabse jyada koi tadpa hai to wo hai rajveer... ha... i even cant imagine ki koi rajveer jaisa bhi ho sakta hai... dekhne me hum dono bilkul same hai.. par humari soch... humara nature bilkul alag... kash... kash main rajveer jaisa ban pata... unke cadets... kitna pyar karte hai unse.... aaj wo nahi hai... fir bhi hai... sahi kaha hai kisi ne... zindagi lambi nahi... badi honi chahhiye... jahan aapke jaane ke baad bhi aap ho.. aapki baat ho... aapke nishaan ho.. aap na hokar bhi ho.... and Rajveer aaj aap nahi ho to bhi koi hai.. jo aapko utna hi chahta hai.... you are lucky.....

Both sujal and naina lost in all these thoughts, in the conversation they had today....... and soon drifted into sleep..........

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2-3 days have been passed... Piyush health was improving... But still in coma.... Pooja and ali have gone too meet pooja's parents.... Only our sujal and 4 of them are residing in that house....

Breakfast table.......

Huda:- sujal... Yar tu abhi aur kitne din hai yahan.... ?

Sujal:- mujhe bhagaane ki jaldi hai kya....? Tu kahe to abhi....

Huda:- are nahi yar tu bhi na.... Wo kya hai na ki hum mission pe hai... Par bahut boring ho raha hai... Kyun na thoda pincin Manaya jaaye.... Yeh huda is ghar me reh reh kar bore ho gaya hai...

Aalekh :- aisa hai to kma pass hi hai... Ja chakkar laga ke aa....

Huda:- baat to sahi hai....

Sujal:- waise guys... Naina ne mujhe tum sab ki training days ke bare me sab kuchh bataya hai... Sunne me to bahut exciting jagah lagi mujhe... I wish main kma ja pata.....

Yudi:- sujal... Dont be sad yar... If possible hum aapko jarur kma leke jayenge... Par humare mission ke bad... Kyuki jaisa aapne kaha naina ne aapko sab bataya hai... So you must be know... You are look a like of our rajveer Sir.... So we cant take you there now... Sab hazaro sawal karenge....

Naina( coming out of kitchen,):- ha aur jitna sujal army ki nazro me ayenge.... Utna hi dusman ki nazaro me bhi aur and we cant affoard it.... Sujal aur unki family ko khatra ho sakta hai.... Waise rajveer sir ki death ki khabar to sabhi dushmano ko pata hogi.... But we can't take risk.....

Aalekh:- naina sahi bol rahi hai... Agar kisi dusman ne sujal ko rajveer sir samajh kar uda dia to.......

Sujal :- are darao mat.... Main normal civilian hu yar... Rajveer sir ya tum logon jaisa daring nahi hun....

Huda- wo to hai.... waise phoolan kya baat hai... Mr garewal se seedhe sujal ha.... ( he winked at her)....

Sujal:- to isme problem kya hai... Bhagwan ne aur meri family ne mujhe itna pyara naam dia hai... SUJAL... To mera naam lene me problem kya hai... Naina meri Friend hai.... Jaise tum sab kyun naina....?

Naina:- ji.... Aur huda... Tu apna dimag kam hi chala to hi better hai..... Saand kahin ka.... ( all laughed at this... While huda making faces...)

All were having their breakfast with little chit chat.... Yudi noticed... Naina was lost....

Yudi:- naina, why are you lost....? Missing pooja and ali...? 3-4 din me aa jayenge we....

Naina :- ya not exactly....

Aalekh ( while having paratha):- fir kisi ladke ki photo bheji ma ne.....?

Naina :- ha na.... Photo hi nahi ladka hi bhej dia hai is bar....

Aalekh:- ja mil le... Kaha ka hai...?

Naina:- yahi ambala ka... Par main nahi milna chahti....

Huda:- oye chali ja... Waise bhi tune mujh jaise gabru ko kho hi diya hai.... Kisi tom, dik ya harry se milne me kya jayega tera... Ja... Ja....

Naina:- shut up....

Huda:- waise tu kahe to yeh jutt abhi bhi tere liye available hai....

Yudi:- tu sameera ko dhoka dega huda....?

Sujal:- sameera huda ki GF na....?

Huda:- oh ha....

Sujal:- bechari.....

Other than huda.... All laughed.....

Huda:- oye chup karo main to mazaak kar raha tha.....

Aalekh :- to mat kar.... Naina... Ja mil le... Ma ka dil rakh le....

Sujal:- waise you should go naina... Kya pata... Isi tarah tumhe tumhari manzil mil jaye... You said na... Tum dil se aage badhna chahti ho... Rajveer sir ke liye.... Bas itna yaad rakhna... Us insaan ko chunna... Jo tumhare sath rajveer ko bhi apna sake.... Kyuki rajveer is dil me humesha rehne wale hai... Aur ha... Kabhi bhi rajveer ko bhulne ki kosis bhi mat karna....

Aalekh :- aisa possible hai kya....?

Sujal:- bilkul hai.... Pata hai... Meri mumma... Humesha hi mujhe krishna radha, gopiyon aur rukmani ki kahaani sunaati thi... Aur sath hi yeh bolti thi ki krishna na jaane kitne gopiyon ka prem hai.... Un gopiyon ka krishna ke liye prem... Unke pati ki taraf bewafai to nahi hai.... Theek usi tarah rajveer tumhari zindagi ke wo krishna hai... Jo tumhara pyar hai... Tumhare aadarsh hai.... tumhare Guide hai... Jo tumhare bhagwan hai.... Par iska matalab yeh to nahi... Ki bhagwan ko pujte - pujte aap apne pariwar ko pyar nahi de sakte... Apne jeevan sathi... Apne bachho ke liye jo pyar hai.... Wo to alag hai.... Aur bhagwan to kabhi galat raah dikha hi nahi sakte..... Aur kisne kaha ki pariwar aur pati ke liye bhagwan ko bhul jaao.... Hai na.... ( all were just looking at him.... And Can sence a seriousness and purity in his voice )

Aalekh:- par saamne wala mamuli insaan hai... Wo na samjha to....?

SUJAL :- samjhega... Sirf wahi insaan samjhega jo naina ke liye bana hoga.... Jiska pyar naina ke liye rajveer ke hone na hone ka mohtaaz nahi hoga.....

Yudi:- dude... Itni achhe tarah se to hum khud na rajveer sir aur naina ke rishtey ko samajh pate... Na samjha paate.....

Huda :- baat to sahi kahi yudiye ne....

Aalekh in his heart:- ek pal ke liye laga ki humare rajveer sir aa gaye... Aur sujal... Tujhe pata sab hai.... Samajhta bhi sab hai... Par apne personal mamle me bhondu ban gaya tu.....

Huda:- to phoolan jayegi kya usse milne....?

Naina:- ha... Aur thoda theek laga to sab bata dungi use.... Uske reaction se hi mujhe samajh aa jayega... Ki worth it hai... Ya nhi....

Yudi:- perfect.....

Naina:- par....

Huda:- par kya....?

Naina :- main akele nahi jaungi... Tum me se mere sath kaun jayega....?

Huda:- main chalu.... Kab jana hai....?

Naina :- aaj sham....

Aalekh:- kabhi nahi... Saale tu jayega... Aur naina se as per your nature, flirt karne se baaz to ayega nahi... To rishta hone se pehle cancel ho jayega....

Naina :- very true... Kash pooja yahan hoti.... Aalekh tu chalega....?

Aalekh :- aidi hai kya... Behen hai tu apun ki... Kaun sa bhai.... Apni behen aur jeeja ki pehli mulaakat me sath jata hai....

Naina rolled her eyes...... And looked at yudi..... Sujal was listening to them and enjoying their fun banter.....

Naina:-yudi....

Yudi:- no naina... I cant... Main kya karunga.... Aur waise bhi aaj meri shalini ke sath date hai....

Huda:- uhoooo... Shalini madam... Waise Saturday hai na... Ambala me hone ka full fayda utha raha hai tu.....

Naina( gusse me):- fineee... Koi mat chalo.... Mujhe bhi nahi jana....

Yudi:- naina yar... Sujal hai na.... ( to sujal ) sujal... Would you mind if you can go with her.....

Sujal( little shocked):- main....?

Aalekh :- perfect hai... Sujal tu naina ke sath chala ja pls... Apun bhi nahi chahta ki wo akeli jaye... Pls...

Sujal:- do you guys really trust me to this extent....?

Naina :- Hume aap par utna hi vishwas hai... Jitna ek dusre par.... Kya aap chalenge mere sath....?

Sujal( kuchh soch kar) :- ok... I'll come.....

naina:- thanks.....

Sujal:- achha mera ho gaya..... Mujhe kuchh kaam hai... Aata hun....

After saying this he left from there..... After finishing up with breakfast they ( sujal was not there) called ali and pooja.... And asked about thier well being... Also let them know about whar ever sujal said and naina going to meet a boy.....

Pooja:- hyeee... Kash is sujal ke dil me kashish ki ring tone na baj rahi hoti... To hum humari naina ka life time connection sujal se hi jod dete.... ( all became shocked....)

Ali:- pooja kya bol rahi hai aap....? Thank god sujal wahan nahi hai....

Pooja:- galat kya kaha... Sujal ne jo kaha... Means uski soch waise hi hai... Par sorry to say... Duniya ke 95 percent mard aisa bilkul nahi sochenge... Wo kabhi bhi kisi aur ka apni patni ke dil me hona bardast nahi kar payenge...

Aalekh - baat to tune sahi kahi hai Punjaban....

Naina:- aalekh tu bhi....

Aalekh :- hum sab ke liye... Sujal ke liye bhi humare rajveer sir, Krishna ji ki tarah honge... Par Duniya ke liye to ek aam insaan.... Fark hai.... Soch ka fark hai.... ( for making fun) waise i dont mind agar Sujal aur naina ek sath....

Naina:- chup kuchh bhi bolta hai.... Pooja se door reh.....

After saying this naina went to her room....

Yudi:- waise pooja... I agree with you... Ho sakta hai na ki rajveer sir na sahi... Atleast unke look alike humari naina ki kismat me ho....

Ali:- par sujal to un kashish ji se...

Huda:- oye usool.... Kashish ka pati piyush jinda hai.. Aur sujal khud us kashish ki sachhai janta hai ki kyun usne sujal se shadi ko ha kaha.... Bhul ja.... Kashish sujal ka past hai... Par apni phoolan sujal ka present aur future ban sakti hai.... Aur pichhle kuchh dino me jitna humne sujal ko jana hai... He is a nice man..... Meri phoolan ke liye perfect.....

Ali:- baat to aap logon ki sahi hai.. Par aap logon ko nahi lagta ki hum sabko is mamle me interefere nahi karna chahiye... Un dono ki kismat judi hai... To khuda khud unhe sath laa dega....

Aalekh :- bat to sahi kahi tune ali... Lekin kuchh to kismat khel hi hai... Jo hum sab ki life me, do - do ham sakalo ka kissa chal raha hai.... Ek taraf piyush aur abdul kaadir... Aur dusri taraf sujal aur rajveer sir.....

Pooja:- ha... Par abdul kadir aur piyush villain ki category me aate hai.... Aur humare rajveer sir aur sujal... Hero ki category me... Agar mere rajveer sir SRK hai to sujal RK se kam nahi hai.....

All smiled on pooja's words....

Ali:- achha ab hum rakhte hai... Dhyan rakhiye aap sab emergency ho to call kariyega....

All hangs up....

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Evening time.....

Sujal was waiting in hall for naina... So they can go to the pub, where She is going to meet the guy.... After few minutes naina came in nevy blue and copper sleeveless salwar kameez dupatta was around her neck... He was just looking at her.... She came to him and gave a smile.. Sujal was in black outfit... With black leather jacket....

Sujal :- you are looking nice... Chale...?

Naina:- ji....

Both moved ahead out of the house......

In the taxi......

both were sitting at the back seat.... None was saying anything ..... But finally sujal broke the ice....

Sujal:- naina..... Wo pub kyun.... ?

Naina:- dont know... Jab baat hui to he said ki pub me aa jao... Aur achha hi hai... Itne sare log honge awkward nahi lagega..... ( he smiled )

Sujal:- ek baat aur puchun...? ( she nods in yes)... Tum sirf formality ke liye ja rahi ho na usse milne... Tum sirf apni mom ka dil rakhne ke liye.....

Naina ( instantly ]:- aapko kaise pata...?

Sujal:- nahi bas... Thoda thoda samajh gaya hu tumhe.. ( she smiled )... Waise uska naam kya hai...?

Naina:- Aryan....

Sujal:- naam to sahi hai.... Bas banda bhi sahi hona chahiye.....

Naina:- dekhne me bhi handsome hi hai...

Sujal (for fun) :- mujhse bhi jyada....?

Naina ( with a smile ):- ji nahi... Aapse jyada to bilkul nahi Par asal baat to soch ki hai....

Sujal :- true..... Waise i was just kidding.... Dont mind ha....

Naina:- i know.....

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They reached the pub... And got settled in the corner table for 4.... Waiting for aryan to come..... After 3-4 min a man came in greay jacket with white and blue outfit.....

Aryan( played by hussain kuawajarwala):- hi... Naina right....?

Naina:- hi aryan... Meet my friend... Sujal....

Sujal while saking hand with him....

SUJAL :- sujal... Sujal garewal....

Aryan:- aryan wadhwani.... Nice to meet you... Waise naina... You didnt told me ki aapke friend bhi aane wale hai.... Never mind... Waise aap apni photo se jyada khubsurat hai... Bahut jyada...

Naina :-ya.... Thanks....

Sujal (coughed):-... You guys carry on... Main wahan bar me hun....

Aryan:- thanks....

Sujal assured her with his eyes and moved to the bar counter... But his eyes were on them only.....

Aryan:- so... Actually i am nervouse....

Naina :- me too... ( then looked at sujal... Then again looked at the floor)....

They were asked each other about their hobbies and etc. But right after his eyes fell on the entrance and so he turned.... And sat on the opposite direction.... His back is some how facing to naina.... Naina felt little awkward... And sujal too from the bar counter noticed it.....

Naina::- aryan kya hua....??

Aryan:- wo kuch nahi naina.....

Naina looked at sujal.... Sujal also came... And tapped his shoulder..... Aryan got up.... But tensed....

Sujal (with a stern face):- problem kya hai....?

Aryan :- actually naina.. I don't want to marry you....

Sujal ( with a little angry tone):- what... To yahan time pass karne aaya tha Kya...?

Sujal held naina's hand.... This was the first time he touched her..... She looked at him... While he was staring at aryan.....

Naina:- sujal Wait... Aryan baat kya hai... Kuchh minute pehle tak you were ok... Aur abhi... Look if you dont wanna go ahead... Thats cool... Mujhe to khud shadi nahi karni... Wo to ma ke kehne pe aai thi... But you seem nice man to me... Batao what the issue....?

Aryan looked both sujal and naina.....

Aryan:- tum log woh ladki dekh rahe ho.... A girl in green top and jeans... Uska naam piya hai.... ( played by shradha nigam)... Wo meri GF hai.... Par kuchh din pehle humara jhagda hua.... I love her alot... And same main apni mom ke kehne pe yahan aaya.....

Sujal:- chhote se jhagde pe kisi aur se shadi kar loge kya.... Stupid..... Wo pyar karti hai tumhe...?

Aryan:- ha... Par ruthi hai....

Naina :- to mana lo....

Aryan:- but how....? Dekho na... Kaise uss khachhar ke sath has rahi hai...

Naina (kuchh soch kar):- idea....

Then she told some thing to both sujal and aryan..... Sujal's eyes popped out....

Sujal:- pagal ho gayi ho kya... Kabhi nahi.....

Naina:- sujal please... Kisi ke pyar ka sawal hai.....

Aryan:- plss... Par dur se ha....

Sujal:- are par... I can't....

Naina held his plam... And requesting.....

Naina:- pls pls pls....

Sujal ( finally gave up):- ohk... You guys start..... Main jata hu uske pass.....

Sujal went near to piya... And intentinally hits her shoulder by his.... She looked at him....

Sujal:- sorry....

Piya:- its ok....

Sujal took his drink... And was standing near to her... So she can hear him... Right then his cell ring....

Sujal:- ha ma... Ha are bahut achha hai aryan.... ( as piya heard aryan... She looked at sujal....).... Naina ko to bahut pasand aaya.... Jald hi ab aryan wadhwani aur naina singh ki shadi hui samjho.... Are ma... Aapko naina pasand hai na... Bas....

Piya in her heart:- kahin yeh mera aryan toh....

Sujal on phone:- ha dono yahi hai pub me... Nahi main unke pass nahi hun.... Wo to neeche dance floor pe gaye hai... Ha.... Aisa laga mujhe they fall in love.....

Piya ran and from the upper stairs saw both naina and aryan....

At the dance floor.... ( now just imagin sujal naina as abhishek and aishwarya and aryan and piya as ejaj and gautami from this song.. Dance steps are same).....

Aryan:-

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha.....

Naina:-

Ho tumhe aaj maine jo dekha.....

Aryan:-

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha....

Chamka hai kismat ka tara....

Badli naseeb ki rekha......

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha.....

( Both aryan and naina were singing and dancing like a couple....)

Other hand sujal winks at piya... Trying to flirt with her.... Right then..... Piya held his hand and braught him down.... Gave a look to aryan.... And started to dance with sujal.....

Piya.:-

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha.....

Chamka hai kismat ka tara.....

Badli naseeb ki rekha.....

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha......

Sujal:-

Tum ishq mere tum khwaab mere....

Tum jaan ho tum ho chaina....

(Sujal also start singing and dancing... Now all 4 of them are singing dancing with their respective partners.....)

Aryan:-

Tum yaar mere tum pyaar mere...

Dildar mere din raina.....

Naina:-

Tum aarzoo mein tum justajoo mein.....

Tum raaste mein manzil mein....

Tum rooh mein ho tum saans mein ho...

Tum dhadkano mein tum dil mein....

( naina and aryan were dancing together....)

Piya:-

Tumhe pehchano tumhi ko janu....

Tumhe ko manu tumhi ko....

Tumhe pehchano tumhi ko janu....

Tumhe ko manu tumhi ko....

Sujal:-

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha....

Chamka hai kismat ka tara....

Badli naseeb ki rekha....

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha....

( by now aryan and naina's side sujal and piya were dancing....)

Naina:-

Tum shok mere tum armaan mere....

Tum dost mere tum dilbar....

Tum zindagi ho tum bandagi ho.....

Kabza tumhara mere dil par....

( by this time now naina passed sujal... And her hairs covered his face for few second.... And he was just looking at her..... She hinted her to dance... So he came out of her trance.... And started singing and dancing with piya)

Sujal:-

Tum rang bhi ho tum roop bhi ho.....

Tum dhoop bhi ho chaya bhi....

Tum menka ho tum apsara ho....

Tum moh bhi ho maya bhi....

Sujal and naina:-

Tum aise ho aaye tum aise ho chaye....

Tumhe dekho main haye tumhi ko....

Tum aise ho aaye tum aise ho chaye....

Tumhe dekho main haye tumhi ko....

( both sujal and naina were pushing love birds to each other...... And aryan and piya colide with eachother.... Aryan prevent her to fall...)

Piya:- Tumhi ko...

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha....

( touching aryan's cheek)

Aryan:-Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha.....

( pulling piya in hug )

Naina:-Chamka hai kismat ka tara....

( smiling at them indicating all the best )

Sujal:-Badli naseeb ki rekha....

( he also gave them thumbs up....)

Aryan:-

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha....

Piya:-

Tumhe aaj maine jo dekha....

Both piya and aryan hugs each other.....

Song used from the movie :- Kuchh na kaho.... Even the scene is also inspired from the same......

Now 4 of them sitting at the corner table.... Both piya and aryan were sitting close and on hands on hand....

Aryan:- sujal.... Naina... Thanks guys....

Piya:- yes... Thankyou... Maine to kuchh hi samajh lia tha....

Sujal:- par pyar kia hai... Trust bhi karo... Aur chhote mote jhagde are part of love... Yun sath aur haanth nahi chhodte....

Naina:- exactly..... Trust is most important factor in love..... There can be trust without love.... But there can not be love without trust.....

Sujal looked at naina.... Naina also looked at him.... Both have a eye lock.... Aryan and piya looked at them and then each other... Then again at them.... By now sujal naina looked down....

Piya:- ab hum chalte hai... Thanks again....

All 4 of them got up and moved out from pub....

Now at the exit gate of pub..

Aryan:- byee guys.... You too look great together..... ( both Sujal and naina were taken a back)....

Piya:- perfect couple..... Hope so aap dono ka pyar bana rahe.....

Naina:- nahi Wo....

Aryan:- meri gadi aa gayi....( to sujal naina) Bye.... Spend some time with each other......

Both aryan and piya left and sujal naina looked at each other with awkwardness.... Then both burst into laugh.......

End of Part 10

Love Chandni ❤️

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