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I'M REWRITING THIS!

20:08, 26 October 2021

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Hi! I have grown, matured, and realized something:

This fic sucks. 

It's not good! It's bad! Other words synonymous with unpleasant, etc.

Dex is an incel, Sophie is completely out of character, and Biana is entirely one-dimensional. But there were some good parts, I admit. For example, that one bit with the laughing in chapter one? GOLD! So good, great job past me!

Other parts... not so much. The first chapter reads like some kind of weird incel fantasy! There are so many plot holes that you'd get charged with public indecency if you wore it outside! 

TL;DR:

I was but a wee little child when I wrote this, and it is far from my best work. So I'm making a version I don't hate as much! Yay!

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