I need help

Ok so first thanks soooo much for so many reads like gshwjjqagav I can't thank you enough like Jesus fuck.... Any who ok as you can prob tell the actual writing is not that good so I already edited the prologue so I just wanted to know if I should bother editing the rest or do you guys think it's fine like I think I've grown a lot as an author but it's up to you just let me know. Peace out Girl Scout! (I'm sorry you had to witness me saying peace out Girl Scout)