twenty seven : THE HOLLOW GIRL

chapter xxvii : the hollow girl

"her eyes were dark, hollow pools of sorrow."

THE QUIET COMFORT FROM THE NIGHT BEFORE WAS NOW A DISTANT MEMORY. Valerie Potter awoke to a pounding headache that felt like a tiny, insistent hammer against the inside of her skull. The side of the bed was already empty, the pillows neatly arranged. Pansy Parkinson had returned to her dorm, leaving Valerie to the cold silence of her new routine. She went through her morning ritual as an act of defiance against the throbbing pain. Each step was a silent promise to herself that she would not be defeated. She curled her lashes with a practiced hand, the subtle pressure against her eyelid a small anchor to the present. She applied mascara along with a sweeping wing of black eyeliner, her focused movements an armor she painted on her face.

Her wine- red hair shone in the gloom as she brushed it, her skirt was a bit too high, and her blouse was unbuttoned just enough to be rebellious. Her movements were slow and deliberate, each act a protest against the crushing weight of her own misery.

On her way to the Great Hall, she found herself walking alone in the quiet corridor, a rare moment of peace. That peace, however, was shattered when she heard her name.

"—Valerie, wait up!"

She turned to see Miranda Lim, Daphne Greengrass, and Millicent Bulstrode hurrying toward her, their faces a mix of surprise and genuine warmth. These were her old friends, her former roommates. A sharp, unexpected pang shot through Valerie's chest. It was a familiar ache, one that hadn't dulled with time.

"—We miss you," Daphne exclaimed softly, her kind eyes full of concern. She reached out and lightly squeezed Valerie's arm. "Ivory's been texting us, saying she misses you too."

Valerie's breath hitched.

Daphne's touch, gentle as it was, felt like a physical weight, a reminder of a past she was actively trying to escape.

Her old life—a life where Eric and Draco was still a part of it, where her biggest problem was a forgotten homework assignment—felt a million miles away. She had distanced herself from them not out of a lack of love, but because she couldn't be the girl they remembered anymore. The distance she had created was the only way she knew how to cope with the gaping hole her loved ones had left.

It was a silent, desperate protest against a past she could no longer return to.

"I know," Valerie replied, her voice softer than she intended. She pulled her arm away gently, pretending to adjust her sleeve. "I'm sorry. Things have been... a lot."

"We get it, we really do," Millicent chimed in, her voice full of sympathy. "It's a lot to go through, and then to change dorms... it must be hard."

"But know we're here for you," Miranda added, offering a small, sympathetic smile. "Even if you're not with us, you're still our friend."

The conversation was quick, a brief, bittersweet reunion that felt like a final goodbye to the girls she had once been so close to. She knew they would be okay, and she knew she had to find her own way now. As they all headed for breakfast, the pain in her heart was even worse than the pounding in her head.

The buzzing in her ears was a constant, low thrum that made it hard to focus on anything. Her headache felt like a physical weight, but she refused to let it show.

The Transfiguration classroom buzzed with the low chatter of students piling inside. Instead of joining Pansy, she walked directly to Hermione Granger, who was sitting with Padma Patil, her books neatly stacked.

"—Got any pain killers, Mione?" Valerie asked, her voice low and laced with a weary edge.

Hermione looked up, her expression shifting from focused to concerned. She saw the subtle way her friend was holding herself—her confident posture was there, but her brown eyes held a flicker of pain she couldn't hide. "Of course, Val. Are you alright?" She replied, rummaging through her school bag and pulling out two tablets.

"Just a pounding headache," Valerie responded curtly, taking the white tablets with a small, grateful nod. "Thanks."

As she turned to walk back to her seat with the medication in her hand, she felt a sharp jolt.

Draco Malfoy had walked past her through the aisle, his shoulder bumping into hers with a deliberate, forceful contact that sent a shockwave through her body.

"Watch where you're going, Potter," He sneered, his voice a low, venomous whisper, meant only for her ears.

Valerie froze, a furious glare burning in her eyes.

The buzzing in her ears intensified, but this time it wasn't just a headache—it was a surge of pure, unadulterated rage. Her heart rate spiked, a hot flush spreading across her skin. She shot him a silent, piercing look of hatred, one that promised a war, before turning her back on him completely.

She took her seat beside Pansy, the anger toward her ex-boyfriend a new fuel for her defiant mask.

It was a familiar, magnetic pull, a push and pull that seemed destined to repeat no matter how hard they tried to stay apart.

Valerie had spent the rest of the morning in a state of quiet fury, her focus split between Professor McGonagall's lecture and the sharp, throbbing pain in her head.

A quick trip to the bathroom after class had confirmed another source of her misery: her monthly period had started, making the combination of her headache and seething anger a volatile mixture.

At lunchtime, her brother had invited her to join him.

As she walked to the Gryffindor table, she could hear Ginny Weasley's social butterfly laughter nearby, a bright, cheerful sound that felt miles away from her own stormy mood.

She slid onto the bench across from Harry, who was deep in conversation with Hermione and Ron beside him.

The moment she sat down, the conversation at the trio's end of the table died.

Harry, Ron, and Hermione were simply staring at her.

Their faces were a mix of concern and confusion.

She ignored them, pulling her drawing journal and a charcoal pencil from her bag. Her knuckles were white as she aggressively sketched, the charcoal scratching against the page with a furious energy.

Her headache was a pulsing drum, her body was in pain, and every frantic line she drew was a silent curse aimed at her ex-boyfriend.

The silence grew heavy.

The worry in the trio's eyes was palpable, and Valerie could feel their gazes on her like physical weights.

"So..." Ron started softly, his voice trailing off as he looked at the tense set of her jaw. "Everything okay...?"

Valerie didn't answer.

She just continued to draw, the scratching sound the only thing that filled the air. She felt their eyes on her, their unspoken questions, and her fury began to boil over.

"Val, you okay...?" Ron asked again, his voice a little more gentle this time.

Valerie's hand stilled.

She looked up, her brown eyes flashing with anger.

The charcoal pencil snapped in her grip, the sound a sharp crack that echoed in the sudden silence. She had a choice: lie and push them away, or let her fury out.

She chose the latter.

"You wanna know what's up, Ronald?" She answered, her voice low and venomous. She slammed her journal shut, the loud thud echoing in their silence. "What's up is men are absolute garbage. All of them. And I'm sick of it."

A random girl sitting nearby had heard the conversation. "Real." The brunette muttered to herself.

Before Harry or Hermione could respond to her defiant outburst, the silence was broken by a new voice.

"Hey, sweetheart."

Valerie's head snapped up.

Jason Montgomery, one of her new Slytherin friends, casually slid onto the bench on the left side of her, a move so bold and unexpected it drew more than a few stares from the Gryffindor table.

He was dressed fully in his emerald green Slytherin Quidditch gear and his dark blond wavy hair fell across his charming, social face with an easy grace. He reached across the table, grabbed a green grape from a bowl, and popped it into his mouth.

The nickname 'sweetheart' sent a sharp, painful reminder of Eric that sent a pang through her chest. Her mask, however, was on, and she betrayed none of it.

"Slytherin tryouts are happening soon," He announced to no one in particular, his gaze sweeping over the silent Gryffindor trio. "I'm looking for some new talent."

He was the Slytherin Quidditch captain, and his presence alone felt like a challenge.

"I heard a rumour that Malfoy might quit as Seeker," He continued, as if discussing the weather. "Guess the pressure got to him."

Valerie froze, a mix of genuine confusion and worry overriding her anger.

Draco truly loved that sport: he lived and breathed for the glory of the Slytherin team.

For him to quit would mean something was terribly wrong.

Across from her, Harry's face had gone slack with shock.

He and Draco had formed a quiet friendship during the time Draco and his sister had dated, a bond forged in their shared love of Quidditch.

The thought of Draco giving it up was as unthinkable to him as it was to Valerie.

He shot a worried, questioning look at his sister, but she was staring at Jason, her expression unreadable.

Jason patted Valerie's shoulder in a friendly, easygoing way that felt vaguely possessive. "Anyway, catch you later," He winked before walking off, the conversation about Quidditch already forgotten as he headed for the Slytherin table.

He left Valerie with a chaotic mix of emotions: grief from the nickname, rage from her fight with Draco, and a new, unsettling worry about the rumour he had left her with.

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A DULL ACHE STILL THROBBED at the back of Valerie Potter's head, but it was a distant memory now, muffled by the low rumble of music from a small black speaker and the easy laughter that filled Mitchell and Jason's dorm. She sat on the floor, her back against the rough, stone wall, her knees tucked up to her chest. It was a space of comfortable chaos, a stark contrast to the sterile, almost-clinical precision of Draco's room. She remembered the perfectly made bed and the textbooks stacked at precise right angles. Here, Quidditch posters were peeling at the corners, stray socks littered the floor, and a half-eaten bag of Bertie Bott's Every Flavour Beans sat open beside her knee.

A new song began to play, some rock with a heavy, driving beat.

But Valerie found herself humming a soft melody that had been stuck in her head all day, a tune that felt as old as the castle itself.

Pansy, a steadfast anchor of support, sat shoulder-to-shoulder with her, a silent presence of reassurance. "You look hot," She whispered, her lips brushing Valerie's ear, a warm smile playing on her face.

Valerie smiled back, a genuine, unguarded smile she hadn't realised she was capable of anymore.

The jeans she wore—low-rise and form-fitting—and the black skin tight crop top that exposed a daring sliver of skin, were a calculated rebellion.

A little piece of her hoped a specific blond would see her, just to see what he would do .....

A crystal bottle of Firewhiskey was passed around, its fiery contents sloshing with each movement.

Valerie had never drunk alcohol, and the sight of it made her feel a mix of nervousness and excitement.

When the bottle landed in her hands, she stared at it, her stomach tightening with a thrilling fear.

"Where'd you even get this?" She asked, her voice a little higher than she intended.

Iris Young gave a casual shrug. "We have our ways."

The group cheered, a chorus of "Go on, Val!" and "Don't be a coward!" That filled the air with good-natured encouragement. Valerie felt her cheeks flush, but this time it wasn't from embarrassment. It was from the thrill of belonging.

She took a small, careful sip.

The liquid was acrid and bitter, a burning sensation that seared her tongue and throat. Her eyes watered, and she grimaced, a theatrical expression that made the whole group erupt into laughter.

The warmth, however, was surprising.

It spread through her chest and limbs, a slow, pleasant buzz that made the world a little less sharp and a lot more forgiving.

As the night wore on and the Firewhiskey bottle got passed around a few more times, Valerie's defenses slowly began to crumble.

She laughed freely, the sound feeling unfamiliar and wonderful.

The room felt warm and alive.

The music was a deep, thumping rhythm.

Then, just for a moment, the music seemed to change.

The beat grew muffled, distorted, as if it were being played underwater.

The warm air around her grew cold, a sudden, damp chill that made the fine hairs on her arms stand on end.

She looked up, her gaze drifting toward the corner of the room.

There she was.

A figure, ghostly and pale, standing in the shadows.

Her black hair cascaded around a face of perfect porcelain, and her eyes were dark, hollow pools of sorrow.

She was gone in a blink.

Valerie Potter squeezed her eyes shut and shook her head, the image dissipating like smoke.

Just the alcohol, she told herself.

A drunken hallucination.

Nothing more.

The corridors were quiet and still, a stark contrast to the lively chaos of the dorm. Valerie's steps were uneven, a light-headed giddiness making her stumble slightly as she made her way toward the Prefects' Dormitory.

The lingering chill from the dorm party still clung to her, a phantom cold that no amount of Firewhiskey warmth could chase away.

As she passed a window, a door to a nearby dormitory opened, spilling a beam of light into the hallway.

For a brief, terrifying moment, she caught her reflection in the window glass of the Black Lake.

However, it wasn't her own face staring back.

It was the face of the pale, black-haired woman she had seen awhile ago.

Her hair seemed to float around her head in the water and her dark eyes were filled with the same heart-wrenching sorrow.

Valerie froze, a gasp caught in her throat.

Her mind, foggy with alcohol, struggled to comprehend what she was seeing.

The student leaving the dorm said a quick goodbye, and the door clicked shut.

The light vanished.

Her reflection returned to normal.

She stood there, trembling, and shook her head, trying to clear the image from her mind. "Trick of the light," She whispered to herself. "And the alcohol. Definitely the alcohol." But a new, terrifying certainty had begun to take root.

This was something more.

She rounded the corner, her heart pounding a frantic rhythm against her ribs.

And there he was.

Draco Malfoy.

He was walking toward his Prefects' Dormitory, his expression unreadable, his pace measured and slow. His grey eyes immediately fell on her, and then on her outfit. A flicker of something hot—anger, she assumed—flashed in his eyes before his face settled into its usual mask of cold disdain.

"Late night, Potter? Trying to find a way to fit in with the pure-bloods?" He snapped, his voice a low, cutting hiss.

"Leave me alone, Malfoy," Valerie shot back, trying to sound tough, trying to sound sober. "You have no right to talk to me."

As the words left her mouth, a sudden, icy touch brushed against her shoulder.

It wasn't a chill: it was a specific, cold hand that made her flinch.

She instinctively turned, her heart lurching into her throat.

There was nothing there ...

Draco saw her reaction. A muscle in his jaw twitched. "Drunk out of your mind," He muttered, his voice laced with venom. He took a step closer, his grey eyes raking over her again.

"You think you're so tough now? You think you're so happy?" He hissed, getting in her face. The words were cutting, but his voice had a raw edge of something else entirely—pain and desperate concern. "You're a complete mess. And you're too stupid to see it."

Before she could reply, he grabbed her by the arms, his hands hot with anger against her cold skin.

He pushed her back against the stone wall, the rough surface digging into her spine.

He wasn't trying to hurt her, but to assert his control, to force her to listen.

The proximity, the alcohol on her breathing, the heat of his body—it was all too much.

"Get off me," She struggled against his grip, but he held firm.

"Is this it, Potter? Is this how you get my attention? Dressing like a whore, drinking with those losers?" His face was inches from hers. The words stung, a venom she felt in her gut, but she also saw something in his eyes, a flicker of pain so deep and genuine she almost believed it.

Their breathing mingled in the small space between them.

His eyes, usually cold and grey, were now a stormy, furious steel.

For a moment, the world seemed to stop.

The anger was so intense it felt like it could turn into reckless passion at any second.

His gaze dropped to her luscious lips, and for a terrifying, thrilling second, she wondered if he was going to kiss her.

But he didn't.

He broke the spell, his jaw hardening, his eyes going cold once more.

He released her abruptly and walked away, his footsteps echoing down the hallway and the slam of his bedroom door.

The silence that followed was deafening.

Draco's words echoed in her head, twisting and turning, until the defiance that had held her together shattered. She was alone, shaken, and devastated.

The quiet of the corridor was no longer peaceful: it was a vast, empty space that swallowed her whole.

The soft, melodic hum she had heard earlier returned, this time louder and more insistent.

It was a siren's call, a tune that felt strangely familiar, as if it had been played to her in a dream.

Confused and intoxicated, she started walking.

Her feet carried her without her conscious command, a pull that felt both external and deeply ingrained, as if an invisible string was guiding her.

She found herself at the edge of the Black Lake.

The moon was a pale sliver in the sky, casting a weak light on the dark, still surface of the water.

The hum intensified, vibrating through her bones.

She stood at the water's edge, gazing into the murky depths, her mind a dizzying mix of alcohol, emotional pain, and the strange pull of the hum.

Then, she fell.

Not physically, but in a vivid, terrifying vision that felt impossibly real.

She was no longer standing on the shore: she was sinking into the dark, cold depths of the lake.

She saw her own hands, pale and ghostly, and the white dress that clung to her.

She saw her hair, long and black, flowing around her like a dark cloud. And she saw the face—a mask of absolute, unadulterated terror, her mouth open in a silent scream as the water consumed her.

This wasn't a ghost standing in a corner: this was an experience, a memory that wasn't hers, and it was horrifying.

This wasn't a warning: it was a curse.

Or so she thought.

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the title "HOLLOW GIRL" both symbolises valerie & the mysterious drowning girl 👀

this was a difficult one to write because it's all about fighting the very things that are trying to pull her apart—grief & betrayal ...

valerie's journey in this chapter is a heartbreaking one of isolation.

the brief reunion with her old friends was a bittersweet reminder of a past she can't return to, and the space she's created for herself is a lonely one, despite the easy laughter of her new group.

it shows that no matter how much you try to distract yourself, some pains run too deep to be ignored.

the final confrontation with draco was a necessary collision.

his possessive anger and hurtful words were a cruel manifestation of his own pain.

he doesn't have the words to tell her he's worried about her or that he hates seeing her so self-destructive, so he defaults to venom and a desperate attempt to regain control.

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( authors personal notes ) published — 10:00pm september 7th 2025current amount of reads — 64.1kword count — 3,547