Im back

I am writing a new book called willpower. Check it out.

Anyways I am willing to go through anyone's book and give my opinion. If you are interested, it's free. Just comment the name of your book and I will go through it commenting what I would change and what I don't like. Lots of you are saying you agree with everything but you still have books that don't follow the rules???? So if you want I will give my opinion about your book. But if I don't like it at all I won't go past the first chapter