Harry Potter A Submissive Creature

TITLE:               Harry Potter A Submissive Creature

AUTHOR:        Isabella - @Isabella9792

SOURCE:         Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/149700038-harry-potter-a-submissive-creature

STATUS:           Completed

TAGS:                #baddumbledore #boyxboy #dracoxseverus #drarry #dumbledorebashing #grangerbanshing #harrymort #harrypotter #harryxseverusxdracoxtom #love #snarry #tomarry #tomriddle #tomxdraco #tomxseverus #voldemort #wattys2019 #weasleybashing #Mature

ADDIONATAL TAGS:          #CreatureInheritance #PowerfulHarry

SUMMARY:

Harry Potter is a submissive creature and has known since he was 11. He meets his mate... or mates? He is mated to Draco, Severus, and Tom Riddle. Harry is a very submissive omega. Draco and Severus are Dominant Betas unless directed otherwise by Tom. And Tom is a dominant Alpha.

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RATING:          6/10

REVIEW:

The story was written vividly but the downside is that there is no structure to the story resulting in plot holes. I noticed that there is major information that changed somewhere in the middle. The information mentioned was also used at the beginning and the way it was later on written, it was like it wasn't known to them.

I don't know if I've noticed all of the inconsistencies in the story but the one mentioned above was what I've found to be the biggest one. It just sometimes left me confused because I was reading the whole book at once so it was easy for me to spot them.

Even though there are a lot of parts listed by the story, 72 in total, they are quite short from a chapter to a regular book. One is even really short that once you scroll you will be directed to the part in between two chapters where there is the Authors profile or story recommendations.

The rating was mostly because of technicalities and in turn having my interest also dwindling. I'd guess that it will be a risk reading it. But if the aforementioned issues I have with the story were not a deal-breaker for you, you are very much welcome to read this story.

Date of Review:     10/06/2021