The Kind Lord

TITLE:               The Kind Lord

AUTHOR:         Piccolo178 - @Piccolo178

SOURCE:         Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/157622045-the-kind-lord

STATUS:           Completed

TAGS:                #creature #darkdumbledore #family ##fantasy #harrypotter #inheritance #parents #supernatural

ADDIONATAL TAGS:          #Abandonement #CharacterBashing #GoodDarkSide #HarryxOC #HeterosexualRelationship #PowerfulHarry #WrongGirlWhoLived

SUMMARY:

what happen when Harry Potter is the older brother of boy who lived?? what will be the situation after the attack if James and Lily potter is alive?? what happen when they praise the wrong boy who lived?? what happen when they make a mistake that is unforgivable?? will Harry take revenge or forgive his so called family or is he have family?? Read and find out the life of the true boy who lived

grammar and spelling errors may occur . I am not that fluent in english and I am sorry for it.

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RATING:          4/10

REVIEW:

As the Author claimed, there really are a lot of grammar and spelling errors, and I think there are also misused words. This resulted in me being confused about what the Author wants to convey on some occasions. The Author also seems to be an amateur writer. He/she has a great idea for the story but it was not elaborated quite well.

For the story, it was good for entertainment but I don't think that it was satisfying. I like the idea of having Harry as someone powerful and have escaped an abused fate. But the idea for this story was I think too farfetched.

For this, I think the focus for this story was to exaggerate and to give a great ending for Harry. Despite this rating, I would just like to remind everyone that this was not made to berate or discourage authors from writing and expressing themselves. This was after all a free website and you are free to express yourselves however you want. So I am making this to give an insight for the authors and readers alike to help them improve/decide if they will read a story or not.