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Louis Tomlinson

03:59, 8 November 2017

I had always been best friends with Eleanor. She was my best friend since the first day that she moved in across the street from me. It was like we were destine to be best friends. She had always dated Louis. One Direction were our best friends. I had always had a crush on Louis. Every time that he would talk to me, I would blush and she was the only one that knew that I had a crush on him. Then one day when I came to see the guys without her, there she was sitting on his lap holding his hand and kissing his cheek like she had done nothing wrong. I thought that me and her were best friends. The day that she betrayed my trust, I stopped being friends with her. Not one time had she mentioned to me that she liked Louis. It really hurt me that she wouldn't tell me anything like that. I thought that she trusted me and that we could tell each other everything.

"Hey, do any of you guys wanna hang out today?" I asked the guys.

"What would you wanna do?" Harry asked.

"I don't know. Something fun," I said.

"Why don't we all go laser tagging?" Louis asked.

"Thought you were hanging out with your girlfriend?" Liam asked.

"I was until she got a last minute photo shoot in Japan," Louis said.

"I say that is a great idea and we could be on teams but someone would have to be by their self," I said.

"I will be by myself," Harry said.

We all headed to the laser tag place and picked out our team colors. Louis decided that he wanted to be on a team with me. Liam and Niall were a team and Harry was alone. Zayn had left the group by now that all of us were sad about it but we got used to it. This was going to be fun.

"Let's go upstairs and we can shoot them when they come up the ramp," Louis whispered.

"Sounds like a plan to be," I whispered back.

We went up to the ramp and waited for people to come up the ramp and we would get them. We got mostly all of them then they would get us. It was fun until Louis decided to drag me to the back and hide.

"Louis, what are we doing?" I asked.

"We are hiding," Louis said as he kissed me.

I broke the kiss and said "why did you just do that?"

"I did that because I knew that you liked me. Eleanor just took me away from you because she wanted to make you jealous. She didn't want me to have you. She knew the way that I looked at you was the way that no one would ever look at her. She is the most evil person. She treats me like shit when we are away from the others. She doesn't want anyone to have me other than her. I don't know why she treats me the way that she does," Louis said kissing me again.

"Then enjoy this moment while we can," I said.

We began to have a hard core make out session. He began to take my clothes off. He was going to fuck in the laser tag arena. I hoped that none of the guys will see. The more clothes he took off, the more nervous I got. After he had me fully naked, he took his pants off and put his dick right in my pussy with no protection. It made me kind of nervous if Eleanor found out about this she would kill us. He was fucking me hard and fast. He put his hand over my mouth to try and keep me quiet so that the others wouldn't hear us. I had four orgasms the whole time we were fucking. We rode out all of our highs together. When we were finished fucking, he cleaned my pussy with his mouth and it felt so good. He swirled his tongue fast and he was deep in my pussy with his mouth. After he was finished cleaning me up, we put all of our clothes back on and we went back to playing the game. Not long after the game was finished we headed back home.

"So I have a question for you two," Harry said pointing to Louis and I.

"Where were y'all for like 10 minutes of the game?" Liam asked.

"We couldn't find y'all anywhere," Niall said.

"We were hiding from y'all because we wanted to win," I said.

"I think that y'all were fucking," Harry said.

"Louis has always had a thing for you. He told us the first day that he liked you," Niall said.

"And he didn't tell me because he was with Eleanor," I said.

"I am with Eleanor and if I fucked y/d/n then that would be cheating and I would never do that. I would never cheat on my girlfriend," Louis said.

"But you don't even like her," I said.

"Why did you say that?" Liam asked.

"Because he doesn't. He told me and I know that he doesn't want to say the truth but I will. Eleanor treats him like shit. She yells at him all the time and he told me all of this. She is only dating Louis to make me jealous because she didn't want me to have him. She saw the way that he looked at me and she knew that someone would never look at her that way so she took him away from me because she didn't want me to be happy," I said.

"Louis, you need to break up with her because being with her is not healthy for you. You deserve to be happy and being with Eleanor is not making you happy. Be with someone who makes you happy and that is y/d/n," Harry said.

"I am going to call her," Louis said.

Phone call

Louis: Eleanor, I have something to ask you.

Eleanor: What do you need to ask me?

Louis: Are you dating me because you knew that y/d/n liked me?

Eleanor: No

Louis: You are lying to me.

Eleanor: Fine. I am lying. I saw the way that you looked at you and I knew that no one would ever look at me the way you looked at her. She looked at you that way because she loves you and she still does. I took you away because I wanted you for myself. I didn't want her to be happy. She didn't deserve to be happy.

Louis: I am done with you. We are breaking up and there is nothing that you can say that will stop me. Goodbye.

"Louis, you just broke up with her," I said.

"All for you because I love you and will you go out with me?" Louis asked.

"I would want nothing more than to go out with you and be your girlfriend," I said then Louis kissed me.

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