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Closure

22:34, 8 February 2025

Hello people Thank you for readin this story, I Apologize that I stopped updating I got super busy with life and just wasn't inspired anymore. I was gonna just gonna never update but I felt bad cause I def understand the pain of never getting an update for a fanfic. So i made this final chapter as closure it's a chapter to give you infromation on the past and the connections between the characters. It's not excalty a written as a chapter either just connecting the details for you all .

All of this information is form my planner

Rising Action / Mounting Problems

Troubles mount as the conflict kicks into high gear. What keeps the protagonist going?

-He needs to protect NuNew, he has been kidnapped and some of the other bodyguards have also got caught up since they were overnumbered mid-way

-The attempts to kill NuNew doesn't stop and zee is going mad and he keep NuNew in his house and wont let him out he's afraid and NuNew starts to hate him and zee starts to feel hurt

How the Confession scene was meant to go ? [ it was gonna happen after a mission they were rescuing Nat and Chay who got kidnapped while tyring to protect NuNew]

"Why are you always so concerned about everything I do? Just stop bothering me." NuNew yelled out in frustration, throwing his coat onto the floor. "Everything was perfect till you came along, Zee

"Because I care about you! , Zee yells out in caps those letters would be 'I care about you so much it's messing with my brain; I can't do anything correctly; I've failed over 13 operations because the only picture, thought, and sound in my thick skull is YOU. " He says the words softly as they leave his lips, bringing his palm to his head, hitting it in anger before grabbing the coat from the couch and leaving, leaving me standing there speechless.

[ I'm 100% sure I will use this idea for my other fanficiton I started with Geminifourth, that one is going strong, more info down below]

NuNew past and the accident near the terminal area + why he has loss of memory

His parents were killed by the mafia his dad was a mafia member maybe who is a selfish man and his dad might have caused the mafia world alot of issues by selling their info to the other grups the French/Russians maybe and that why he might have been shot dead and NuNew may have withnesses that as a boy maybe he was 15 and the uncle is a dirty man who only cares about money and NuNew is a burden to him but he needs an heir for his business the uncles does drug business secrretly and he is not even NuNew uncle he is the guy that took NuNew under his care due to the Mafia boss order that Mafia guy was Kimhan during his mission the dad was shot int he place Kim was there and so was porchay with him who inistsed on coming so that why NuNew was alive still chay wont let Kim kill him ,they sent him to the hospital and he ended up a orpan who didn't remeber much and the mom was already dead of his so he was made an Orphan the uncle guy was the dad busines partner so he took him in after seee in the news .} okay Kim didnt force uncle kit he was just made to not kill due to chay .

NuNew might have seen Zee before during the killing of his father. NuNew ended up in that place because he was studying in the back of his dad's car and fell asleep and woke up in that unknown place, got out, and was caught in the middle of it all, and he was hiding, saw the dad get tortured and some other guys. He also saw Zee and Chay and Kim and a few others.

It was already discussed Zee and NuNew were childhood friends who got sperated. And in the first chapter the boy that helped him in the nightmare was Zee.

The villians

Mark Anderson Anthony- [ Italian] Mafia Leader-He hates the thai top mafia they made him lose a lot of his profits and Kim and vegas and Zee killed his Brother and they hurt his son who is brain dead

-But the son deserved it the son was a bitch and he was assaulting girls at the bar who were incomparable and he did many bad things and Pete was the one who actually made the son brain dead but Vegas made sure things went on him even though pete didn't want that but vegas loves Pete .Also the son of the Russian mafia leader messed up alot of Business deals for the thai Mafia group the minor and major groups .

NuNew uncle [ Chaelrm]

- He is NuNew's real uncle; he is the brother of NuNew's mom, and he hates Nuew because of his dad, who killed the mom since he wanted her property.

He joined the Italian gang and eventually built himself up.

- Selfish and arrogant old man, hates everyone, is working on building himself up. He was once a powerful mafia in France, but the government intervention was made, and he couldn't take care of it, so the police attacked his headquarters, and his guards were captured, and everything was destroyed. It turns out the location leaked because Zee wanted him down. He was troubling them a lot, and they disliked his business on sex trafficking, and they shut it down.

He joined the Italian soon after escaping from jail and getting his passport illegally and fake, and off he went to Italy and met the Mark Anderson who helped him rebuild.

The Final Act of the story would be a attack at Main family mansion

By this time NuNew has grown and become much stronger, he has built a connection with Zee regainign his Memories.They have fallen in love and killing his Uncle and the destroying the italians was their final action of war. Together they hunt his uncle down and get rid of him. Zee has his shadow guards present in italy attaching Mark Anderson. And it's a happy ending yay.

This is all I can give if anyone wants to know anythign extra jsut comment. I'm sorry again I couldnt write an actual chapter its been like half a year and my brain can't remeber all the pieces. But hopefully this closure is enough yk why his Uncle wanted NuNew dead.

Thanks for reading "His Gaze"

I am working on another fanfiction with Geminifourth called Double Trouble its Romcomxmafia plus other stuff. I was planning to release chapters once I had atleast 20 chapter written down because that would mean I have a chance of finishing I have 6 chapter written down lol I've been stuck on 7 for while but look forward to that story.

A sneak peek at the cover, I will probably change it .

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