Twenty Three

Stop writing suicidal fanfiction.

Scenery description = yes.Love interest's hair description = no.

Describe the kinds of clothes people wear, not what people were wearing on that occasion. Eg: a girl who dresses in jeans normally is easier to picture on a long-term basis than a girl who "was wearing a peach spaghetti top with a light brown shrug and brown knee-length short with flip-flops" that one evening.

Do your protagonists even go to school? Every 17-year-old out there seems ready to jump onto One Direction's tour bus and ignore all educational requirements.

Neil Gaiman fanfiction. Write it. PLEASE!